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Do you like my story | You'll Never make it as a writer!!! | | 0% | [ 0 ] | I love it!!! CTS, and hurry. | | 83% | [ 5 ] | It's okay! | | 17% | [ 1 ] |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: A Naruto Story Sun Nov 19, 2006 6:13 pm | |
| Sakura, Naruto, and Sasuke are waiting for Kakashi at their normal spot.
Sakura: He always does this to us!!!
Naruto: I know!!! It's like this every time!!!
Sakura: Oh, no one asked you, Naruto!!!'
Naruto: Hey, I can give my own opinion if I want to. It's not up to you.
Sakura: Whatever, Naruto.
Naruto: It's been well past five hours. I am SO mad!!!
Sasuke: Wow Naruto, I'm impressed. I didn't even know you could tell time.
Naruto: HA! Shows hom much you know. Wait a minute... HEY!
Something crept up behind Sakura.
Kakashi: Did I miss something?
Sakura: Sensei...
Naruto: YOU'RE LATE!!!
Sasuke: And this is a surprise to you, Naruto? | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
Number of posts : 276 Age : 30 Location : Bored.com Occupation : running this forum Registration date : 2006-09-27
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Sun Nov 19, 2006 7:02 pm | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Mon Nov 20, 2006 5:01 am | |
| Yay! Someone likes it!!! I'll cts when I get home from school. I'm still a little tired. ...YAY | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Mon Nov 20, 2006 6:01 pm | |
| Kakashi: This is no time to be arguing. The Hokage needs to speak to us as soon as possible... Sakura, Sasuke, Nar...
Sakura screamed at the top of her lungs. She was gone!
Sasuke: Where's Sakura?
Naruto: I-I don't know.
Sasuke: What else is new?
Kakashi: It's him! It's time! Everyone, back to the Haokage's home.
Sasuke: But... Sakura...
Kakashi: There's no time. We must go!
Shadows were surrounding them.
Kakashi: NOW!
Sasuke, Naruto and Kakashi started running to the Hokage's place. They would be safe there.
Kakashi opened the door and shoved Naruto and Sasuke in the building and closed the door tightly behind him.
Hokage: It's time.
Naruto: For ramen?
Sasuke: They have Sakura, shut up Naruto!
Naruto: I'm hungry!
Sasuke: Eat your finger. | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
Number of posts : 276 Age : 30 Location : Bored.com Occupation : running this forum Registration date : 2006-09-27
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Tue Nov 21, 2006 7:12 pm | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Wed Nov 22, 2006 9:29 am | |
| The Hokage, stared at Sasuke
Hokage: He seems very angry about Sakura's diappearence...
Sasuke: Who are we talking about? And where did they take Sakura?
The Hakage turned to Sasuke
Hokage: Why are you so worried about the girl? Last I heard you said she was annoying.
Sasuke: What is this guy getting at? Where is she?
The Hokage smiled.
Hokage: You're worried about her.
Sasuke: I know that thank you very much... She's my teammate!!!
Hokage: I can show you her if you want?
Naruto: Can I have some ramen first?
Sasuke turned to Naruto.
Sasuke: I'M GOING TO GET RID OF ALL THE RAMEN IN THE WORLD IF YOU DON'T SHUT THE HELL UP!!!
Naruto of course, didn't shut up.
Naruto: You're not the boss of me!
Sasuke: But I could beat the hell out of you!!! So I suggest you shut up!!!
Naruto: NO!
Sasuke: YES!
Naruto: I'M NOT LISTENING!!! LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LA LAH LAH LAH LAH LA LA LA!!!!
Sasuke shoved a pair of dirty socks down his throat.
Sasuke: Show me.
The Hokage walked down the hall with Sasuke and Kakashi following. They walked into a room with a crystal ball in the middle. The Hokage sat in front of it and Sasuke sat across from him. Kakashi sat next to Sasuke. Kakashi knew the Hokage shouldn't be showing this to anyone, especially Sasuke. But he felt that he had to. | |
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Naruto too good
Number of posts : 96 Age : 30 Location : uh..uh...uh...playing Runescape *suspicous look* Registration date : 2006-11-09
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Thu Nov 23, 2006 6:15 am | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
Number of posts : 276 Age : 30 Location : Bored.com Occupation : running this forum Registration date : 2006-09-27
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Thu Nov 23, 2006 11:33 pm | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Fri Nov 24, 2006 8:47 am | |
| Sasuke saw the crystal glass start to glow. The Hokage sprinkled some dust on it and started chanting some words. Sasuke started to see a picture of Sakura, with a man wrapped in black standing over her, speaking to another man. They were bother wearing black and masks, but one of them seemed familiar to Sasuke, but he couldn't quite figure it out.
MIB(One standing over Sakura): Our plan is already working. She's losing life by the minute
Sasuke stiffened a muscle.
Sasuke: WHAT!
Kakashi: Let them finish.
MIB: I can sense the boy's rage. His little friend is in danger and he doesn't know what to do.
MIB#2(The mysterious one): How pathetic.
Man in black#2 Shook his head.
Man in black looked at Sakura and kicked her unconsious body. And laughed.
MIB: She should be dead soon anyway.
Man in black#2 Laughed as well. There was something about their laughs that seemed really suspicious.
And then the light faded from the room and Sasuke's only clue to where to find Sakura, faded away.
Sasuke: Sakura will not die. | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Fri Nov 24, 2006 8:48 am | |
| Sorry it's so short. And vote in the poll already. I'll cts later. | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
Number of posts : 276 Age : 30 Location : Bored.com Occupation : running this forum Registration date : 2006-09-27
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Sat Nov 25, 2006 12:54 am | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:52 pm | |
| I will soon! | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Mon Nov 27, 2006 7:43 pm | |
| Naruto: *chewing something* So... *chew* why do they *chew* want Sakura?
Kakashi: To lure all of the Ninja academy there. I have a feeling that they aren't just going to want Sakura. Only, especially Sakura. They're going to want the other girls too.
Naruto: Why?
Sasuke: Naruto needs to catch up on the love commotion...
Hokage: Because, girls have a naturally stronger chakra. [Ha ha!!!] They'll probably take all their chakra to help them build the ultimate weapon.
Sasuke: But that means sh-they could die.
The Hokage nodded.
Sasuke: So... that means Hinata, Tenten, Temari and Ino? And why especially Sakura?
Hokage: Sakura is different. It's a family secret that not even Sakura knew about and I shouldn't speak of.
Kakashi: Sasuke, Naruto, please go in the other room.
Sasuke and Naruto left but Sasuke stayed outside the door and listened.
Hokage: Sakura was born with more chakra than anyone else. Her parents felt she was in danger which she was. Not only she would be unstoppable but she could die. | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
Number of posts : 276 Age : 30 Location : Bored.com Occupation : running this forum Registration date : 2006-09-27
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Wed Nov 29, 2006 2:51 pm | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Sun Dec 17, 2006 8:16 am | |
| [LOL!!! ^^]
Sasuke: No.
Kakashi: I know that much, but why would they keep it a secret?
Hokage: For the very same reason for what's happeneing right now.... Sakura's life is at hand.
Sasuke: No. No, no no!!!!
The Hokage looked to the door.
Hokage: If you want to know that bad, then just come in......
Sasuke opened the door and practically started yelling.
Sasuke: How could you keep this a secret from her? Now that they have her, she must have no idea why.
Kakashi: Sasuke, calm down. I've never seen him this angry about Sakura.....
Hokage: It was my job to keep it a secret. Or else this wouldn't be the only time she would have been kidnapped.
Sasuke: It happened so quickly.... Even I couldn't stop it......
Kakashi: Sasuke, freaking out isn't going to save her.
Sasuke: Then how do I save her? | |
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zaya n00b
Number of posts : 6 Registration date : 2006-12-03
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Thu Dec 21, 2006 2:21 pm | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Mon Dec 25, 2006 2:32 pm | |
| Kakashi: I-I don't know.
Kakashi looked down at his feet.
Sasuke punched his fists on the table, the Hokage and Kakashi jumped in surprize.
Sasuke: I should have protected her....
Sasuke had his eyes closed tight.
Kakashi: Sasuke....
Kakashi placed his hand on his shoulder.
Kakashi: Don't be so hard on yourself. You should calm down.
Hokage: That sounds like a good idea.
Kakashi escorted Sasuke out of the office. Sasuke let his head hang as he walked out of the room.
Sasuke: She's more than just my teammate.... she was......
But his thoughts were interrupted by a horrifying sound...... | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
Number of posts : 276 Age : 30 Location : Bored.com Occupation : running this forum Registration date : 2006-09-27
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Tue Dec 26, 2006 11:55 am | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Thu Dec 28, 2006 11:59 am | |
| Sasuke ran outside. There were two black men carry Hinata away.
Sasuke: Naruto!
Naruto ran outside to see why Sasuke called.
Naruto: What is-
Naruto saw Hinata.
Naruto: Hinata!
He started running towards the men.
Naruto: Shadow Clone Jutsu!!!!
Fifty Narutos appeard surrounding the men in black...
Sasuke: It's the men from the crystal ball....
Naruto: Attack them! But watch out for Hinata!
All of the Narutos started charging at the men in black. They dropped Hinata and ran away. Naruto lifted Hinata off of the ground supporting her.
Naruto: Hinata, are you okay?
Hinata: N-Naruto....you saved me....
Hinata blushes bright red.
Naruto laughed.
Naruto: I guess I did.
Sasuke: Those guys just weren't after Sakura...they're after all of the Kunoichis!
Hinata: What's wrong with Sakura?
Naruto and Sasuke looked down and explained what had happened to Sakura, to Hinata.
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
Number of posts : 276 Age : 30 Location : Bored.com Occupation : running this forum Registration date : 2006-09-27
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Thu Dec 28, 2006 2:36 pm | |
| cts(Kunoichis are female ninja, you don't need to say female kunoichis) | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Fri Dec 29, 2006 8:34 am | |
| Thanks! ^^ | |
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Naruto too good
Number of posts : 96 Age : 30 Location : uh..uh...uh...playing Runescape *suspicous look* Registration date : 2006-11-09
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:47 pm | |
| CTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE I'LL CTS ON MINE IF YOU HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Sun Jan 21, 2007 11:47 am | |
| Okay! | |
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Naruto too good
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| Subject: Re: A Naruto Story Tue Jan 23, 2007 7:39 pm | |
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