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How do you like it? | It's great! cts | | 100% | [ 8 ] | It's average. cts, i guess | | 0% | [ 0 ] | It's terrible you'll never make it as a writer | | 0% | [ 0 ] |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
Number of posts : 276 Age : 30 Location : Bored.com Occupation : running this forum Registration date : 2006-09-27
| Subject: Ulrich's secrets Sun Oct 01, 2006 7:37 pm | |
| this is the first part in a series of story's, of pain, suffering, drama, romance, and betrayal, with no meaning, told by and idiot.
Chapter 1:Hatred pt. 1 of 9
Ulrich is a freshman all by himself, Odd was held back and is in 8th grade, Jerimie and Aelita were skipped ahead to sophmore, as is Yumi. Yumi is going out with William, and Jerimie and Aelita are too. Ulrich's twin sister, Jessica is now attending Kadic, as is Odd's little sister, Mary, Hiroku, and Ulrich's old friends from his old school, Franklin, (most of this is a spin-off of Ulrich's mysterious childhood on the code Lyoko forum, if you want to read that to get and idea I'll add a link later) Antoine, Alexandre(Alex for short), and Anastasie(Ana for short).
Ulrich and everyone are at lunch.
Ulrich:it sure is nice to have some old friends again, what's new at Franklin? Antoine:Well, as you know, they sold the gold lined benches for science funding, but now they fired Lunch lady doris. Ana:Lunchlady? with how much hair she had you'd think she was a man. Odd:Hey, Ulrich how come you never told us that you used to go to Kadic's rival school, Franklin. Ulrich:*ignoring him*I guess the school plumited when they lost my dad's funding. Are the showers still made of gold tiles? Alex:No. now it's mold.
Yumi sits at another table with William as he kisses her. Ulrich sees them and bends his fork. Everyone sitting at tha table scoot a seat farther away from Ulrich.
Later...
Ulrich is in his room now with two bunk beds instead of two beds, on one side is Ulrich and Odd, on the other is Antoine and William. Odd is playing with kiwi on the floor, Antoine is drawing and eating snack bars, William is on the phone with Yumi and Ulrich is throwing darts at a dart board with a picture of william on it.
William:Cya Yumi.
He hangs up.
William:Hey odd, if your dog goes on my socks I'm telling Principal Dejarto(Principal Delmas got promoted). Odd:Fine. Odd whispering into Kiwi's ear:go on his socks.
(on the poll don't be afraid to vote bad about my story just because I can ban you.*have my finger's crossed*)(joke) | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Mon Oct 02, 2006 2:17 pm | |
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kivyroku Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Sun Oct 15, 2006 1:59 pm | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
Number of posts : 276 Age : 30 Location : Bored.com Occupation : running this forum Registration date : 2006-09-27
| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Sun Oct 15, 2006 2:08 pm | |
| Chapter 2:The dating game. Odd:Hey, Ulrich, wanna go watch me ask girls out. Ulrich:Nothing better to do. Odd:Sweer. Let's go.
They go out into the Quad(courtyard). Odd walks up to a random girl.
Odd:Will you go to the dance with me? Girl:No, jerk.
She slaps him.
Ulrich:Strike one.
Odd does the same with another girl, and gets the same answer.
Ulrich:Strike 2.
Odd does the same but with Ulrich's sister.
Jessica:No, I'm asking some one else. Ulrich:Oooo, strike 3, you're out.
Jessica walks by Jerimie.
Jessica:Hey, Jerimie, do you want to go to the dance with... Jerimie:no. Ulrich:Well, me and Antoine need to get ready for the dance. Odd:Why, you don't have a date. Ulrich:No, but we're working the snack line. Odd:Oh. Can I help? Ulrich:No.
Odd runs over to Alex.
odd:Hey, Alex, you wanna go to the dance with me as friends? Alex:Who are you, Steve Martin? I'm going by myself. odd:Of course.
Odd knocks on Aelita's/ Ana's dorm door.
Odd:Hey, Ana, wanna go to the dance with me? Ana:i don't go to dances. And if I do, I don't wear anything special.(she believes in full equal rights, she won't wear anything a boy can't wear or do anything a boy can't do.) Aelita:You know, why don't you just try it, you do have that beautiful dress in your closet. Ana:I've never worn that thing in the five years I've had it, and I never will. Aelita:Huh, you as stubborn as a mule. As for me I have a date. Ana:Your stupid, why partake in teenage relationships when they won't last more than a month or two. Aelita:I take it you say this from experiance? Ana:Yes. Aelita:Well I'm gonna go take a shower.
She leaves, takes a shower and gets dressed in a pink dress, then goes back to her room.
Aelita:Well, what do you think? Ana:I think your stupid.
Meanwhile at Yumi's house.
Hiroku:I still think you should go out with Ulrich. Yumi:Ulrich's just not what I want in a boy. Hiroku:Yeah, see ya. i'm going with Mary. Yumi:Mary, as in Mary Della Robia? Hiroku:Yeah, why? Yumi:You're going out with my friend's little sister. Hiroku:Yeah. Yumi:As long as you don't bother me or William at the dance I'm fine. Now get out I have to dress.
She pushes him out her door, shuts it then gets dressed in her average dance clothes, then goes to the dance.
At the dance...
Odd is hanging out at the snck bar.
Odd:Ah, now this is what a dance is supposed to be, three guys hanging out with each other, manly. Antoine:No man, you don't get, this room is filled with hotties. Ulrich:No, you my naive friend, don't get it, this table not only acts as a physical barrier so that we don't have to partake in getting dangerously close to members of the opisite sex.
A girl walks by.
Ulrich:Plus all the hotties come straight to us. | |
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Naruto :) n00b
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Mon Oct 16, 2006 12:41 pm | |
| CTS | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Mon Oct 16, 2006 2:07 pm | |
| Special:Karaoke
Jim:And now time for our Karaoke wheel. First up is. Ulrich:You couldn't pay me to put my name in the drawing. Jim:Ulrich Stern! Ulrich:What?!? Odd:I put it in as a joke.
Ulrich goes up to the stage.
Jim:Okay Ulrich, spin the artist wheel. Ulrich:You may have got me to come up here and sing a degrading song in front of everyone, but I'm not spinning that wheel. Jim:Okay.
Jim spins it.
Jim:and it lands on Styx, no Weird Al Yancovic.
After a few more spins he is singing the wealsel stomping song.
Ulrich:That's it I'm done. Jime:Okay, next up is Jeremy Belquois. Ulrich's next song was "White and Nerdy" So that's what you'll sing. Odd:the song that fits him most.
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Naruto :) n00b
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Mon Oct 16, 2006 2:13 pm | |
| Funny. | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Mon Oct 16, 2006 2:19 pm | |
| I'll make a chapter tomorrow | |
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Naruto :) n00b
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Mon Oct 16, 2006 3:24 pm | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Tue Oct 17, 2006 7:32 pm | |
| sorry I had a bunch of homework, so tomorrow, if I can | |
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Naruto :) n00b
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Tue Oct 17, 2006 7:49 pm | |
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Naruto :) n00b
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Thu Oct 19, 2006 4:27 pm | |
| um...are you gonna put it up? | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Thu Oct 19, 2006 5:19 pm | |
| (one sec)
Chapter 4:Xana
Jerimie:So how's the table going. Ulrich:It's not like a bussiness.
Jerimie and Aelita go bakc to dancing and Antoine goes to the bathroom. Xana posses Ulrich. William walks up to get some punch.Ulrich/xana flips the table over ontop of him.
xana:Rrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh. Jerimie:Xana. Aelita:Oh yeah. Odd:So are we going to the factory. Jerimie:Duh.
Jim walks up to Ulrich.
Jim:Stern, what is the meaning of this.
Xana punches and makes him fly 10 ft. into the wall.
Jerimie:Let's go.
They start running toward the door but Ulrich gets there first.
Odd:Hey, let us through. xana:Oh, I'm sorry, do you need to use this door? Odd:Yes.
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Naruto :) n00b
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Thu Oct 19, 2006 7:41 pm | |
| cool. CTS. | |
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Harada Riku VIP
Number of posts : 234 Age : 30 Location : In the middle of the desert.... looking for donuts..... Occupation : None (Besides doing chores around the house but I don't get paid for that anyway) Registration date : 2006-09-28
| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:15 pm | |
| yeah. cts, it's good. And i'm almost finished with my forum, could some people sign up on it please? http://stardustrandomness.heavenforum.org/index.forum | |
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Naruto :) n00b
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:45 pm | |
| r u gonna post a new chapter? | |
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Harada Riku VIP
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Tue Oct 24, 2006 3:16 pm | |
| I hope so. I LOVE it!!!! And can you PLEASE join my forum?
http://stardustrandomness.heavenforum.org/index.forum?sid=5db76137c0f93c717de93177d8bb4e30 | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Tue Oct 24, 2006 8:58 pm | |
| Chapter Five:Hatred pt 2 Xana:I didn't give you these powers your hatred did, I'm just releasing it out for you. Ulrich thinking:No, no, I could never cause such destruction, never. xana:You have live with it Ulrich thinking:not live, dieHe reaches for a peice of broken and starts to peirce it into his flesh when William jgets out from under the table and punches him. William:Take that! Ulrich's hatred breaks xana's grasp on him and he lunges at William still with the powers he had a second ago. Ulrich:He was right, it's my HATREDUlrich, engulfed by his hate, starts walking to kill William, ahen Yumi punches him. Ulrich stop and fell unconcious. Jerimie and Aelita used this time to get to the factory only to find the tower deactivate. Jerimie:Return to the past now. Later.. Odd:So Ulrich how come you were still tricked out like Randy Quad from Caddieshack 2 after xana left you. Ulrich:He said my powers were my hate. | |
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Harada Riku VIP
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Wed Oct 25, 2006 3:24 pm | |
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Harada Riku VIP
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Wed Oct 25, 2006 3:27 pm | |
| - Admin wrote:
- Special:Karaoke
Jim:And now time for our Karaoke wheel. First up is. Ulrich:You couldn't pay me to put my name in the drawing. Jim:Ulrich Stern! Ulrich:What?!? Odd:I put it in as a joke.
Ulrich goes up to the stage.
Jim:Okay Ulrich, spin the artist wheel. Ulrich:You may have got me to come up here and sing a degrading song in front of everyone, but I'm not spinning that wheel. Jim:Okay.
Jim spins it.
Jim:and it lands on Styx, no Weird Al Yancovic.
After a few more spins he is singing the wealsel stomping song.
Ulrich:That's it I'm done. Jime:Okay, next up is Jeremy Belquois. Ulrich's next song was "White and Nerdy" So that's what you'll sing. Odd:the song that fits him most.
(chapter later) LOL! I LOVE THAT SONG!!!! and what does Ulrich pierce himself with? It doesn't say. | |
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Thu Oct 26, 2006 5:57 pm | |
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TCLNF Staff/Owner/Maker Admin
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Sat Oct 28, 2006 9:59 pm | |
| Chapter 6:Hatred pt. 3
Yumi:But who do you hate?
Jerimie Odd and Aelita look towards each other then look back.
Yumi:Well cya, I got to get ready for the dance.
She leaves.
Ulrich:Odd, I filled up your night. Odd:What? Ulrich:You're working instead of me. Odd:Well better then looking like a loser.
That night instead of going to the dance Ulrich goes out into the woods to release his anger on a tree. Punching rapidly. He doesn't notice that his knuckles were bleeding.
Ulrich:I hate you William.
As he said that his voice got deeper, as did his hatred. | |
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Harada Riku VIP
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Sun Oct 29, 2006 8:31 am | |
| DON'T DO IT ULRICH!!! cts! | |
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| Subject: Re: Ulrich's secrets Wed Nov 01, 2006 3:25 pm | |
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